Protagonist group
Name: Derbin Blaine River
Name: Kara jordan sandas “KJ”
Name: pog jessie bogstar
Name: Avery Jacob Fullwind

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derbin’s life had more meaning then the scared shy little boy who ran from girls and was bullied by boys.
Derbins life was meant for leadership, despite his shy
Victory was the future for young derbin despite his shy boyish ways
Childish boy. Against the grain. Rise to leadership. Victory over his own fears and the bog.
who lost his parents and was raised by his uncle and aunt. He was the third wheel in the family because his aunt and uncle had 2 kids of their own.
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